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Blue Haze

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Butterfly

    I am becoming a fan of your work. I love your subject matter and the raw emotion that you capture in your poetry. Perhaps this could in part be because ...

    May 9, 2006
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Cruel to be Kind

    Wow, this really touched me, my curiosity gets the better of me here and I am left to wonder what it is that happened exactly. Still putting that aside, I ...

    Feb 20, 2006
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I stink at titles... So this will be called "something&

    Fantastic writing, easy to read, something that I would pay for. I am really enjoying this, however I am forever hopeful that there is more going on here than just ...

    Feb 19, 2006
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Camp Berkeley

    This could certainly go somewhere, and to some degree I really liked your 'easy to read' writing style. However there was nowhere near enough description, or imagery, for me to ...

    Feb 19, 2006
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dive into life

    I LOVED this poem, the way it is written, the subject, and the fact that it is positive. It made me feel good and it gave me good visuals. So ...

    Feb 19, 2006


The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes, but in having new eyes.
— Marcel Proust